This is my revision process below. Some key aspects that I changed was further annotating the poem to really dig in deeper into the poem. I explained myself more, as you can see on page 2, where I gave an explanation of what stretto means. I also made some broad, overarching claims that needed to be narrowed down on page 3. Since I made the claim and it is implied on my behalf, I also had to make it clear that this is my interpretation and not the interpretation of Celan. On page 5, I explained my source of the symbolic meaning behind “purpleword” further.